Military guys and anyone else...

[third_shift|studios]

These are some ads. i'm working on for a company call L-3 Cincinnati Electronics. I would like your feedback on them. They will appear in variuos defense/military magazines. Please select options from the poll-multiple choices allowed; leave feedback if you so desire too. Thank you!

[juiced99ws6]

sweet ads jaison. I work with alot of L-3 guys since im in Aviation..

[third_shift|studios]

Thanks, bud! L3 is a massive parent company to many.

[knappbunch]

Those are great. I Replaced the A/C units in one of l3's offices here in virginia beach.

[juiced99ws6]

yeah, good company to work for to. They pay there aviation side a buttload of money lol

[B34M3R]

I'd say they look professional, and definately get the point across....

Have you thought of doing with a little "camera view" of an infrared imagine in it? I think that would be sweet

Actually, one with a before and after if you can find one... like one with a foggy indistinct view, and one with a couple of guys sneaking around in it....

[third_shift|studios]

Most of the IR shots are classified

[1MileCrash]

i was also gonna say if you could get a side by side IR shot on the 2nd ad that that would be perfect...but if it's classified then...well...you know.

the first one i like though. do you have any made like the first one that have foul weather as the background? it says that they can cut through inclement weather and then there is a blue sky background...that kind threw me off a bit...but i still like it.

[1fastcamarosss11]

i say take the equipment from the first pics, and but it in the second setting/scene.

[Nitro_Junkie97]

looks good. theres an L3 here in Waco.

[ArcticZ06]

Most of the IR shots are classified

+1 on doing an IR or nightvision shot. If its classified then just simulate it. do a picture in a green hue or inverted B&W of some terrorists. I had a PS filter that simulated infrared. Let me know if you want it. Always looks interesting if you put a crosshair on there too.

[PureSShp00]

i say take the equipment from the first pics, and but it in the second setting/scene.

I agree

[01ws6er]

Some creative criticism.....Your second add says "visually prepared", but I can't see shit in that picture....A few dobbers and a car, with a lot of sand; And although that is probably what it looks like all the time, even through their equipment, maybe advertise "visually prepared" with night vision, or a pic through their equipment compared to a pic of that without...

You do good work though!!!

[Smkn_TA]

Hmm...you know what the ad needs? That overhead shot in the A-130 while playing COD4, you know when the terrorists are running out of that church. Use that image and say like because when hitting the church means game over, you just gotta see clearly.

In all seriousness. The first seems to open and free not anything happening. The camera is floating out in nowhereville. I like the way the second one has the camera flipped, don't know why it is just more appealing. Also, the second one has the page broke in two and that looks awesome. The black backround on the border really catches your eye. Use the bottom one, but move the border down a little. And change the picture above. Like a panoramic view of a military base or zone in iraq. Oh, and it pisses me off to no end when people use periods in phone numbers instead of hyphens. Seriously. 1.800.867.5309 it looks like your giving me the frequency for a ham radio station in tai fucking wan.

EDIT: I got bored and had to go cod4 on it, deleted all names to be safe. If you want it down for © reasons I'll delete it.



Then again I failed art.

[state69champ]

Thats are sweet...

[jad628]

These are some ads. i'm working on for a company call L-3 Cincinnati Electronics. I would like your feedback on them. They will appear in variuos defense/military magazines. Please select options from the poll-multiple choices allowed; leave feedback if you so desire too. Thank you!

I like the second one. It has a "grunt" feel about it.

Ever considered an ad that shows the with/without kind of image?

Look at catalogs like Galls and Brigade Quartermaster for ideas. They key in on the LEO/Military aspect.

[third_shift|studios]

here's some of the previous ad series we've done before. I know what you guys are saying, you want to see the IR image/version...maybe it's just b/c i've done that SOOO many times before this that i wanted to break away?











PS...i've got MADD photoshop skillz

[jad628]

here's some of the previous ad series we've done before. I know what you guys are saying, you want to see the IR image/version...maybe it's just b/c i've done that SOOO many times before this that i wanted to break away?











PS...i've got MADD photoshop skillz

Those rock!!! If it ain't broke, don't fix it, bro.

[Packy]

I know L3! Those look good!

[third_shift|studios]

thanks, Packy! that's important coming from you.